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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-02-02 07:51 AM


As I was sitting in a chair
Watching a sunrise any could share,
A low splash of several hue
Red orange purple yellow and blue,
But not vibrant in coloring
For on the water mist was lingering
Blurring slightly as looking through
With my first cup of coffee stare.

Gloom


© Copyright 2004 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-02-02 08:15 AM


reminding me of the coma I'm in eavery single moring, upon awakening...but that fresh brew dripping, slowly awakens my mind toward the clear colors of morning.  

Another cup, sir?  

Thank you for this song.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2004-02-02 09:01 AM


"celebrate the moments of your life..."



(y'ever notice how they always hold the mug with two hands?)

sigh. Have a cup for me, will ya?

sounds yummmmmmmmmy.

Good to read you again, Prof.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-02-02 09:15 AM


Yea, coffee sunrise.  That's about what it is here this a.m.  Interesting random thought, though.  regards,.......jo
Kie
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 77
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4 posted 2004-02-02 10:48 AM


The imagery was breathtaking. Although short the poem was fantastic to read. I only wished for it to continue on.
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