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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-02-02 12:57 PM



“Photo removed” I pondered as I read
I wondered if the pic was wounded
Or actually really dead

And then the thought did strike me
I never posted mine
So I pinched my self so I could see

If I was really here.

© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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1 posted 2004-02-02 01:05 AM


Nice shot !

steavenr
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2 posted 2004-02-02 01:08 AM


(laughingly he states) okay...you caught me...it was your 'photo' that inspired me...my mind works in such a strange way, at times...okay, okay...all the time...was in fun
Krawdad
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3 posted 2004-02-02 01:13 AM



No offense.
Got sick and tired of lookin' at it!

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4 posted 2004-02-02 04:19 AM


lol
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5 posted 2004-02-02 01:19 PM


Yes, you are!
EvocativeVerse2
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6 posted 2004-02-02 01:23 PM


(Snicker!) Yes you are here. Love the piece.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

McLean
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7 posted 2004-02-02 07:52 PM


ROTFL...sooooooo humorous this is!  You have to wonder about those instructional tags, eh?

Laughing....a good thing!

McLean

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8 posted 2004-02-02 07:56 PM


Ha, ha! I like your sense of humor! Grover.
Bill Charles
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9 posted 2004-02-02 07:57 PM


steavenr - if you wrote this post I would believe that you are here, but post a photo, and then you would be for sure...

BC

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10 posted 2004-02-02 08:36 PM


enjoyed the wit and humor of this...
thanx.

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11 posted 2004-02-02 09:04 PM


ok, gotta love it when something brings smiles.. i love it.

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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12 posted 2004-02-02 09:08 PM


Ya know, steavenr, I've wondered the same thing...  One thing for sure, is that you're here and kicking...Nice short write!

         ~sadelite~

steavenr
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13 posted 2004-02-02 09:39 PM


As the Thought Master sits in silence in his Tibetan-like surroundings, pondering the meaning of the universe, he breaks his vow of silence, only to utter, “If a photo develops in a darkroom, but there is no photographer there to witness it, does a picture really exist?”  He then sinks back into a momentous solitude to contemplate the import of the query.  Alas, what a quandary!
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14 posted 2004-02-02 11:24 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Steaven, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I believe you are here even without a picture, you are a special presence to us all, yay, I hope soon we get to see your new picture too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Steaven, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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15 posted 2004-02-02 11:24 PM


ROFLOL, steavenr...

Don't know which is better...the great poem or the wonderful repartee!  Thanks for it ALL!  Love it!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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16 posted 2004-02-04 03:17 PM


I suspect there are many whose pictures are here, and don't exist....in one way or another....

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Susan Caldwell
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17 posted 2004-02-04 03:21 PM


LOL isn't that the truth Ed?


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18 posted 2004-02-04 03:30 PM


I like your wit!  Keep it up!
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19 posted 2004-02-04 03:51 PM


were you?

"there" I mean?


Christopher
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20 posted 2004-02-04 03:52 PM


or is that kinda like asking "did you die?"
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21 posted 2004-02-04 04:06 PM


   ahahahaha!!
Stevean, I love this poem and your responses!!
Real cute!!!
Hugs  
Ethel

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