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Dipper To The Cool
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Dipper To The Cool |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Overlooking me, from heights on splendor meadow The quiet thirst of empty spoken blue, yet painted yellow That somehow caught my heart in drift to steer a turn for turn And suddenly the softest touch became a Knight to yearn The chimes that sparkled through the wheat a sweet and fragrant pale Sent capture for my favor bidding of once lost detail Then lingered in the hour favored fluttering of harp Returning in an echoed smile that clung in talents sharp So deep in thought, his eyes cast down to walk a lonely road Returned to me a music once forbidden in the rise it flowed That I might hear his heartbeat just beneath his armored chest And I found my head was resting up against his pounding quest Overlooking, ever watchful as his arm around and near Not expecting or rejecting yet protecting of his fear That disarmed the need to vanquish, as my own home land alight Then returning to the victor gentle stroke upon this Knight Copyright Kkh 2/2/04 |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Your always a joy to read TD This was so very good!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! What a picture perfect! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Enjoyed this one much,,and for some unknown, crazy(?) reason,,,,it made me think of Shrek! Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, don't know how I missed the beauty. It must have been one of the days that I wasn't here very much. I'm glad that I found it today.  Hugs  Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kathleen -- Phenominal tenderness shown throughout this write. Simply beautiful! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I missed it, only from not having replied.. Shame on me, for this is a beaut. Love the rhyme, the vision it gives me....and of course I always love poetry that has a Knight within the mist of it.... Well Done K. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good writing! Grover. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ThisDiamond...A tremendous poem that has a beautiful flow to it. Your rhyme scheme is done with great expertise and adds to the enchantment of the poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Softly romantic as your graceful poetry is, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is beautifully fanciful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
TD You are magic my love (old english saying) Absolutely beautiful Dave |
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