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wordwizard
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2004-02-02 12:22 PM



Everybody searches for answers with oral pleas
plant kernels in the ground from magic peas;
sweet dreams travel to the x marked spot
likely funneled down a rusty drain slot...

What plea will it be tonight as I sleep
some wanton mystery to be believed
would like truths to be conceived
how will that info be received?
have a window on the world of the magic vine
so that I can wake up and my days will go fine..

Set out to find how the pea shoot grows
while in my veins creative blood still flows
will it transport me to a cloud shrouded castel?
to climb it only to descend is another hassel

But I'll always be looking for some release
to travel continents in search of magic peas
unravel contents of the unsuspecting kind
to wake up to a new world on cloud. nine..



© Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-02 04:35 AM


love the positive outlook here

and the theme is perfect

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2 posted 2004-02-02 11:05 AM


"but I'll always be looking for some release
to travel continents in search of magic peas
unravel contents of the unsuspecting kind
to wake up to a new world on cloud nine.."

One of your best Martin.
Very much enjoyed and into my library it goes.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Kie
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3 posted 2004-02-02 11:17 AM


So very true. I wonder why we look for magic peas? Gives me something to ponder on. Great poem.
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4 posted 2004-02-02 11:21 AM




(sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, keep looking up and beyond and you will certainly find a crystal castle there, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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