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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2004-02-01 09:14 PM



A Sweet Sierra Mourning

there was
a sierra sunrise
and it’s light
beckoned
from the west
I stood on toes
to gently kiss
those rays
an effect
felt never
before known
or since
warming it cradled
a coolness
with the breeze
of calming breath
loving so much
and so little
and how
was I to know
the day would end
as quickly
as it started
oh my sweet
sierra sunrise
I caught
your morning
and I miss you
now that
the moon
has stolen
your skies


** some things are gone…but never forgotten



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-01 09:30 PM


left a beautiful image in my mind...
lovely

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2 posted 2004-02-01 09:35 PM


Lovely lovely images Helen...
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

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3 posted 2004-02-01 09:37 PM




(smiles) Yes, some things are never forgotten indeed, sweet friend, and may this memory of this golden sunrise forever shine in you, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, there will come many more parfet skies, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

jaicie114
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4 posted 2004-02-01 10:44 PM


Absolutely beautiful verse and amazing thoughts behind it. Thank you, Helen.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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5 posted 2004-02-01 11:29 PM


I can't find the right words to tell you how beautiful I think this one was, Helen.
Richy
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6 posted 2004-02-02 02:33 AM



That would be a beautiful thing
to wake up to

Thanks for taking me there...




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7 posted 2004-02-02 04:26 AM


so true...so gorgeous!
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8 posted 2004-02-02 01:22 PM


OneSlick~
I am NEVER disappointed with a gentle read of such beauty from you~
You grace these pages sooooooooo elegantly~
I'm so glad you're a poetess !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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