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Whispered Kisses
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Whispered Kisses |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
You came into my dreams… Filling me with light, with love, with the wonder of all You are. You whispered a soft caress on my cheek; And I responded with a gentle plea: “Let me come home now.” As the tears fell, You kissed each one; Filled my body with Your light and said, “Not yet, my Love… not quite yet.” So, we danced awhile and we loved… In that remarkable realm in which you live. Yet, still... I had to return, to a lonely room in a lonely city with only my memory of dreams and the taste of Your whispered kiss. This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully romantic with a small tinge of tears, sweet friend, may you have many more golden memories like this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jaicie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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C_ROK06 Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 49 |
wow... i love this... its so sweet and romantic. ^_^ "So let us then try to climb the mountain,not by stepping on what is below us,but to pull us up at what is above us,for my part at the stars"-MCE |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
dreaming is beautiful, waiting is not!  this poem was very heartfelt |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Noah, I always smile when I see your reply! C_ROK, I'm certainly glad you enjoyed! muted, So glad I could touch you! Thank you for your replies...they are greatly appreciated. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
KC -- what a wonderful dream....someday, someday. lots of luv........jo |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Thanks, Jo! Yes, it is...and someday soon...hopefully!! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Jaicie, It’s true, some dreams seem so real, that you can almost taste them... This was really special. Thank You for sharing it! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...dreams are but the fuel of hope's desires...well written...enjoyed immensely |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching piece from your heart |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
If tears could compose a poem, this is how they would write. Your pain is vivid to the reading and very emotionally touching. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Richy, This wasn't real? Dang!  LOL steavenr, Wow...thank you! A "well written" from you is an honor! Dixie, See...it isn't ALL hearts & flowers...I can do "pain" if forced!!  Kie, What a wondrous reply...I'm speechless! Thanks to each of you for reading and leaving such nice replies. I sincerely appreciate them. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear jaicie, you express this longing so powerfully. Awesome write. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful writing here Jaicie. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Margherita, Dearest One...thank you so much. You know how much it pleases me when you leave such sweet replies. Sue, Thank you for your gracious comment. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Jc...as always your heart speaks with poetic words. Love, Eric |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this much |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"You whispered a soft caress on my cheek; And I responded with a gentle plea: “Let me come home now.” How could anyone say no to that? "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
hmmm beautiful dreams touched by a romantic muse Hope |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Extremely well written and very much enjoyed! Love this...a keeper for sure. Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...indeed...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jaicie114 - very touching and tender write, liked this very much... BC |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Merlin, I have the best muse from which to learn about speaking from the heart! Thank you! vandana, Glad you enjoyed! Susan, Well, if he was in "this" realm, I'm sure he would have probably succumbed!!! LOL Hope, Yep--the muse was definitely in "play" on this one! Nancy, You honor me...thank you! James, Thank you...indeed...big guy! BC, I'm glad you were touched...that adds a lot to the pleasure of writing. Thank you all for your wondrous replies...I am always grateful! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. [This message has been edited by jaicie114 (02-08-2004 11:04 PM).] |
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