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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-02-01 09:02 PM


(Yay, it's this time again! My annual Candy Heart Poem marathon is on, all tiny poems inspired by Necco Conversation Heart messages! Hope you love 'em!)



TLC
(A Candy Heart Poem)
By: Noah Eaton
2/9/03



So have you found the golden road to unlimited devotion?
Have you sung avocado memories under the sugar magnolia?
You've got to rise up, up, up, love ain't no superstition
Spread the sonic ripples to your brothers, let the music give you claustrophobia

Let your heart cater to your peers like the Moosewood Restaurant
Don't be shy to share your sun-shining sacraments
You can't say no, no, no, this world is too precious to trample upon
You say your world is like the corner of Ashbury and Haight,
then let your heart do some urban renewalment

Think I'm acting serious, you bet I am, but only for humanity's sake
So grab your loved ones hands and shimmer in the sun
We're flower children at heart, you can be the bumblebee if you may
God knows St. Stephen is still smiling, so come on and spread your love...

It's TLC
Turn on your love light
It's TLC
Believe like a dove you can fly

It's TLC
Tender, love and care is all you need
It's TLC
With your help, the world can know peace...



"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

© Copyright 2004 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-01 09:06 PM


I love the pictures and the words ^_^

This is great Mistletoe


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2 posted 2004-02-01 09:35 PM


Noah, this is very cute!
could hear it singing in my head!
TLC is a fantastic thing indeed!

~Dawn

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3 posted 2004-02-01 09:41 PM


FIRST OFF I MUST THANK YOU FOR YOUR REPLY TO MY POEM, LOVE FOR YOU, NONE FOR ME, I JUST PUT 2 MORE ON THE CRITICTS. FOR GOT EXACT FORUM, SECOND ONE DOWNL.  I AM INSPIRED BY YOUR WORDS ALSO. YOU TOO HAVE A SPECIAL GIFT. DONT EVER GET DISCOURAGED, OR LET ONE KEEP YOU FROM EXPRESSING YOURSELF I HAVE BEEN THERE. NOW I AM LETTING THE WORLD KNOW, WHO I AM,AND NOT LET ANOTHER CONTROL AND MAKE ME SOMETHING I AM NOT. ANY WAY, YOU TOUCHED MY SOUL AND PUT A PIECE OF MY HEART BACK, GAVE ME A TEAR, BUT FOR HAPPINESS, AGAIN I THANK YOU FROM MY HEART AND SOUL   MARSHA


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4 posted 2004-02-01 09:58 PM


This is so great, Noah!  My kids like the "hippie bus", as they call it.  I am sooooo a flower child wanna be!

McLean

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5 posted 2004-02-01 10:06 PM


YAY Noah....I was hoping you would post your  candy heart poems again ths year!
I love them!
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

jaicie114
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6 posted 2004-02-01 10:39 PM


Lots of fun here, Noah! Thanks!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

the_loner_23
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7 posted 2004-02-02 05:34 PM


This is a very cute poem. As usual.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Suetang
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8 posted 2004-02-02 07:46 PM


Hello Noah

Your words were so uplifting and spoke so many truths.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2004-02-02 07:50 PM


Noah - I do like these candy heart poems you write...

BC

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10 posted 2004-02-02 08:38 PM


Noah, It's good to see you keeping up with the candy hearts tradition! I remember when I used to do these poems with you...it was fun! You still write as beautiful as ever,
unfortunately I have been left with a heavy writers block for all this time I was gone.
<3
Rose

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