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EverRuss
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0 posted 2004-02-01 07:23 PM


At this time and moment,
All is well.
Time has stopped
The wind no longer blows,
The earth stops spinning,
The waves nolonger crash,
Lightning forget its flash
Children cease to play
Fathers forget to work
Cars nolonger run
Planes dont fly to the sun
The pictures hold in time
Before crashing to the floor
all is well
You walked in the door

If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words

Russell

© Copyright 2004 Russell J - All Rights Reserved
KristieSue
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1 posted 2004-02-01 07:26 PM


that's precious :-)
iliana
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2 posted 2004-02-01 07:40 PM


EverRuss -- wow, you did stop time for a second with this one!
Grover
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3 posted 2004-02-01 07:54 PM


Well said! This is good! Grover.
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4 posted 2004-02-01 08:31 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo sweet and cute, sweet friend, love can always make a moment seem smooth and emphasize everything, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Russell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2004-02-03 06:14 PM


Oh wow, I love how you wrote of time standing still,
when all is right in your world.
Just yes, and thank you~

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