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say you love me... |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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2:03 am my heart is still pounding pounding from our conversation you say you love me like i love you i don't know if thats possible you say you love me more than sunsets or the smell after it rains but i don't know if thats possible you say i'm your everything everything but your my only tell me you love me but please, oh please mean it... |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
very heartful...pleading...great job |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Ha..ha...tell me about it...James |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Straight from the heart, what can I say? Grover. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Exhale -- wow, I like the way you emphasized and reiterated certain words, giving the poem a real potency!  ....jo |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I understand this desire so very much, sweet friend, tears from ones eyes in joy or a whisper will answer the question affirmative, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm this is darn good and should not be on page 3. Back to the top of the list it goes. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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