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EverRuss
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since 2003-12-31
Posts 66
Indiana

0 posted 2004-02-01 05:25 PM



The outside, A haze of dense gray
Arisen over the fresh snow
Pale, white, soft in color
Harsh, is whipping cold winds
This kiss from I to you, warms
Uncorupted by the outside
This fire burns inside, melting
Turning all hopes, desires, a real
Through the eternal darkness,
of the harsh winter
I see your face, Ruby eyes
Cutting through the rich entrapment of your beauty
Your form takes place among the outlines
Of hope, of longing
A transparent ache screams
Echos through the night
Your heart has struck a spark,
My fire rages for you.

If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words

Russell

© Copyright 2004 Russell J - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-02-01 06:04 PM


Wonderful!
TD

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-02-01 06:59 PM


Great poem... romance with some depth to it. I enjoyed reading it. The imagery is excellent! Grover.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-02-01 07:01 PM


Excellent write....much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2004-02-01 08:56 PM




(smiles) Oh Russell, this is beautiful, sweet friend, passion can indeed ake hostage on any heart and I wish for all the gratest joy to come to you! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Russell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
5 posted 2004-02-01 11:22 PM


EverRuss -- this is passion.  The range of emotion went from an ember to a bond fire!
passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-02-02 04:52 AM


good piece!
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