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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-01 03:35 PM

I Read You

I read many
but when
I read you
it never ceases
to amaze me
how I feel
as if
I am in
the middle
of a perfect
acoustical place
and the notes
surround me
with such
tender caress
and I can feel
your blood
flow in
such warmth
and have
the thump
of you in
my own heart

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2004-02-01 03:40 PM

... Thank you, Slicky. Nothing like being on the same vibe as good resonance...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference: http://educate-yourself.org/

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2004-02-01 03:50 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, and your poetry always resonates upon us all with comfort and smiles, sweet friend, God Bless You, you are a true heartbeat of Passions, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

3 posted 2004-02-01 03:58 PM

...have the thump of you in my own heart...

I THINK THIS IS very COOL!

Enjoyed reading your write today! I'm going to tell my hubby that I have the thump of him in my own heart. How beautiful a sentiment!

McLean

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-02-01 04:00 PM

This was beautiful. It could be taken a couple of ways (one romantic, of course), but I took it like the writer is truly able to communicate with the reader -- so my comment based on that interpretation is: I read you, too.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-02-01 04:02 PM

Ah this is beautiful Helen!
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-02-01 04:28 PM

OhOneSlick~
This is heavenly~

A *sigh* waiting for a place to happen~
It 'happened' right here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Kie
Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 77
USA

7 posted 2004-02-02 04:09 PM

I so enjoy reading poetry that has musical qualities. This was fantastic.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2004-02-02 04:11 PM

Breath taking..

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2004-02-02 07:42 PM

helen - nice, very nice indeed...

BC

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

10 posted 2004-02-03 11:18 AM

:thump:

:THUMP:

... read it twice!! *S

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2004-02-03 11:34 AM

Awww, I like this, and I bet the one
in mind feels the same....

Hugs

Ethel

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

12 posted 2004-02-03 11:43 AM

Awwww yes ... felt through words
Hope

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2004-02-03 12:45 PM

you said it perfectly

just beautiful...so beautiful to me

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