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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-02-01 12:30 PM



As Always Wishful Thinking

Astonished and amazed
Stunned by the shock
He gave me his heartkey
Had he changed the lock

He made me feel special
So why now this doubt
Had he changed his mind
Deciding to lock me out

Over the past three weeks
His heart key I had tried
I can no longer gain entry
Why was I being denied

His heartkey I keep turning
With heart longing I yearn
As always wishful thinking
In the hope he will return  

HopeĀ©2004

© Copyright 2004 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-02-01 12:34 PM


His heartkey I keep turning
With heart longing I yearn
As always wishful thinking
In the hope he will return


Oh, Hope, I hope that he returns, too!!
Hugs  
Ethel

HopeS
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2 posted 2004-02-01 12:38 PM


Thank you Ethel for your kind caring thought
yes all I can do is wait patiently

Hope

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2004-02-01 12:44 PM


Oh I know,  it hurts to be shut out,
and only makes the heart grow cold, (and colder)

You have expressed the feeling well.
Hugs Hope~

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4 posted 2004-02-01 12:49 PM


love the analogy here Hope

maybe it's time to toss the key into the river?

loveya

HopeS
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5 posted 2004-02-01 12:50 PM


Thank you Lori for being so understanding , its much appreciated

Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-02-01 12:52 PM


LOL thanks Dixie , yes I have felt like tossing it away many times ....a key I had trusted would then become rusted LOL
Hope

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7 posted 2004-02-01 03:52 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, I send many angel hugs your way in hope you find love that lasts forever, sweet friend, always hold its light dear, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
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8 posted 2004-02-01 04:21 PM


Ohhhhh, this makes me feel sad for you.  But, beautiful writing.
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