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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2004-02-01 10:21 AM


Awakened from sleep-
and deep subconscious thought.
Dragged hours over minutes
until they converged and blurred.
Sad simple life moments fell apart,
yet into place.
(as paint will do when splattered on canvas)
And as another day came to a sputter,
and soft pillows cushioned sleep,
monotony found me wishing
for a little more color.

© Copyright 2004 Jennifer Parker - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-02-01 10:24 AM


Jenn  
Interesting read, enjoyed.

ice
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2 posted 2004-02-01 11:26 AM


Jenn
Nicely worded poem....enjoyed reading it
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iliana
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3 posted 2004-02-01 12:02 PM


Jenn -- this is the first of your I believe i've read or else it's been a long time or perhaps I'm losing my memory.  This was really good and I enjoyed it very much!    
passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-02-01 01:01 PM


Jenn, I understand...this really touched me at this time in my life
Steve Motuel
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5 posted 2004-02-01 01:55 PM


wonderful and touching poem!  

sounds like another candidate for the Big Hug Club!

;-)

I really enjoyed this

Hugs
Steve

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6 posted 2004-02-01 01:59 PM


A good photograph! Very good work. Grover.
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7 posted 2004-02-01 02:34 PM




(big angel hugs) This is a most beautifully heartfelt write, sweet friend, variety adds spice to life and I believe it, you've got to finger-paint with all the colors of the rainbow! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you fr sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Jenn Cirrincione
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8 posted 2004-02-02 10:30 AM


Thanks to everyone, I've been blocked, this is the first thing I've written in a while.
Jenn

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

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