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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-01-31 11:56 PM



The blinding lights
of the watch tower
as I stroll along the
rocky clifts of the
shore. the jagged rocks
the crashing waves

gives me their hand
to free the pain
the time goes on
the voices seep
withthin

the moonlight
brightens your
sweet face of
escapement to a
free world pass
to clean and
clear sunny skies

my desire grows
strong my heart
falls to the ground
my eyes well up
last more I leap
I jump into the
blue war.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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1 posted 2004-02-01 12:33 PM




(smiles) Wow, this is a powerfully turbulent piece, dearest friend, this felt kind of sad to me but hope also seemed intermingled in the crest of the waves, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Foxyoasis
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2004-02-01 02:19 AM


Thanks

Hugs!

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