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SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

0 posted 2004-01-31 06:23 PM

Innocence

Sweet innocence
  do not run
Stay here and let pure
  puffs of air drift over me

Let me sink into the mist
  of tomorrow and come out today
laughing, singing
  unafraid

Touch me with no expectations
  Let the tiny sting of lifes charge
     focus me into beginning
The beginning of something I know
   nothing of

What is this feeling,
   the feeling of the first
Is it love?
    then I must be love now,
for I am the charge and can hardly
    sit still

I am alive and in this I
    am the puff of air
I am tomorrow,
   I'm am singing,
I am laughing,
   I am crying,
I am unafraid for today,
  unfraid for tomorrow and
for eternity yet to come..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-01-31 06:26 PM

I believe your emotions and feelings came
through very well, of a time when we all
had that feeling...

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

2 posted 2004-01-31 06:43 PM

SG...indeed, we are all things. Nice write! Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-01-31 06:46 PM

(big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, it is wonderful friends like you who bring cheer and warmth to the world, and I pray that the children of the future can hold the innocence in them dear as they grow older and see the world as Neverland and fly like Peter Pan inside, yay! (kiss on cheek) I may be a young man on the outside, but I dream and live with the spirit of the innocent boy in me, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-01-31 06:52 PM

A good write... wish I could be expressing myself like you right now!!! Grover.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2004-02-01 12:14 PM

Touch me with no expectations
  Let the tiny sting of lifes charge
     focus me into beginning
The beginning of something I know
   nothing of

Fear of the unknown is both exhilarating and frightening at the same time.

So like your poem, I want to sing it out loud.

Good to read your words here, SG~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-02-01 07:58 PM

Eloquent portrait of innocent -- a puff in the wind!

Kie
Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 77
USA

7 posted 2004-02-01 08:01 PM

Wonderful, inspirational pure magic flows from your hand.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-02-02 01:55 PM

pure beauty! very much enjoyed

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