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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“STRANGELY SILENT” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Last night the phone was strangely silent, perhaps it was because my eyes were asleep and my ears could not hear, yet I heard my thoughts, for they were wide awake and of you… They thought of times past and of loving caresses through the night, of times that may be and of embraces to come in the still of morning’s light… Yet last night the phone was strangely silent, and I ponder if it were only because my eyes were asleep… ~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill Very good write, enjoyed. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A powerfully simplistic description... sensitive, smooth and very tidy wording. Excellent poem! Grover. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ 'I heard my thoughts, for they were wide awake and of you…' OH MY ... what a GREAT line~ Greatly enjoyed the read~ Hope all is well with you, my friend~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done BC....who knows, maybe it was? |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A well written poem Bill. I enjoyed it very much. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Bill, Yes, I agree. Very much enjoyed. "They thought of times past and of loving caresses through the night, of times that may be and of embraces to come in the still of morning’s light…" Sigh.. SG |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, whatever it was, you always have the ability to feel from your heart and love never hangs up! (sigh) Yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
my eyes were asleep and my ears could not hear, yet I heard my thoughts, for they were wide awake and of you… Oh yes, Bill...I know these feelings very well!! Hugs Ethel |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this quiet romantic poem. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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