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In The Land Of Dreams And Wishes
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In The Land Of Dreams And Wishes |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Josephine Wall * * * I dive so very recklessly Into this sensual sea As waves of deep desire Start to wash right over me In the land of dreams and wishes Love flows like a tranquil stream I can be anywhere I want When I close my eyes and dream We sample love's sweet nectar From a chalice of desire As I let your kisses quench me The flames of love grow higher This love we share is timeless You found the key to my heart's door Your love is like a hidden treasure I have just begun to explore I never knew such love existed But you came and showed me how I stopped living in the past And started living here and now * * * "If I never met him, I would have dreamed him into being" I am in motion |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
What a beautiful picture! Simply gorgeous! Reminds me of the cards I collect. "In the land of dreams and wishes Love flows like a tranquil stream I can be anywhere I want When I close my eyes and dream" This is my favourite stanza, especially the last two lines. The second line seems to have a little meter glitch, but it's barely noticeable.  Light keep you always, Amara |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Enjoyed the poem, you have a gift with rhyme. Grover. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Spoken thoughts of what we each wish to hold in our hands... Nicely put. Such is deep love, when shared passionately. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang Excellent write my dear. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I never knew such love existed But you came and showed me how I stopped living in the past And started living here and now" Very beautiful Sue... Reads like a Valentine. Lovely indeed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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tavern wench Junior Member
since 2004-01-11
Posts 44 |
We sample love's sweet nectar From a chalice of desire As I let your kisses quench me The flames of love grow higher so sensual!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Smiling at you Sue: Can relate! All good wishes and dreams. TD |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Sue... Both the image you chose and the verse you wrote are exquisite. Thank you so much for sharing them with us. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and in the land of dreams and wishes may you always hop on unicorns and soar up the rainbows to loves awaiting, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Beautiful title and poem! Thanks for sending it to me. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sue, what a wonderfully sweet present this is! Have a good week ahead! ....jo |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
If there ever was such a land Sue You would definately be the queen of hearts! Wonderful!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much needed thank you |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
This is poetry at its best. The picture was beautiful and inspiring but the words, oh my the words were unforgettable. |
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