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Ring of Chance
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Ring of Chance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Ring of Chance I grabbed upon a ring of chance It was a ticket to a dance The periphery of a core Of an entrance to a door I hesitate to press the latch To make a mark or leave a scratch And shied away entanglement The weighty weights envelopment I am a coward there’s no doubt I lacked the clothing of devout I knew the mime and saw the string And knew the vectors of the thing It took some boldness for the dwell To toll the bells and make them swell For all the weight upon the scale I knew but little of the whale Its then I fluttered in the dawn And muttered weakly it was morn |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sy darling man, this is exquisite writing, you always excel sometimes like now you write pure gold. The way you combine words into poetry is amazing, I’m always delighted to read you, sometimes I’m left bereft of speech by the wonder that is you. Thank you for this glittering gem  Love and warm stuff Big hugs Mushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I agree, not to mention the use of words is amazing...lovely write! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You continue to amaze and inspire Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha Your pleasure is my pleasure. LeeJ Thank you sweet, raining here I hope your weather is better.  scorpio Thank you love, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Its then I fluttered in the dawn And muttered weakly it was morn Seymour, I love hearing of your dreams.  Hugs  ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yup, Sy, thanks, weather is better, but very cold, and come monday, we're supposed to get a soaker...hey, are you the one responsible...sending it up here our way? Have a great day...stay inside and rent that movie "Radio"...its excellent! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful writ this morn Sy! Sister/Nightshade's computer is down... therefore you will just have to settle for my tea today.  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Oh, Sy... perchance to dream...you do it so beautifully and seemingly effortlessly! Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethel And I love writing them. :squeeze; Leej Today it's raining here too. Thanks for the read. Hugs. Nancy, Sorry about Chris give her a hug for me. jaicie114, At this stage dreaming becomes a big part of your life. LOL |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Even your dreams are poetry in the making. *S* Excellent write, my friend! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern, Thank you sweetheart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, you certainly are not getting older, and you are getting better...no bout adoubtit.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) You are the lord of the ring, and chance is something that is a sine qua non, which helps us to embrace hope and fortune in achieving the blessings wich may seem more extreme! (sigh) The sky is not the limit, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Barry. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah sine qua non, exactly. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aw...you should see it here, Sy... weak morn? You got it... Dull and gray and bleakly light outside, with slippery slopes to contend with... But I still enjoyed the write. I always do... it begins my day on a grin, no matter what the climes. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And you wil always be my ray of sun. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A breakfast of thought. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed this.....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, Hope you enjoyed. iliana, Thank you dear. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"I lacked the clothing of devout I knew the mime and saw the string" ...and then you put it together as a thing we could understand. Thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh enjoying you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent! Grover. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox Thank you my friend. passing, Thank you sweety. Thank you Grover. |
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