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SweetStephanie
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since 2003-12-29
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Alabama,

0 posted 2004-01-31 05:51 AM



We had a bond they couldn't break
We know because they tried
We possessed something they couldn't take
We had a friendship based on pride

We smoked our 1st cigarette we bought from Windy
We drank our 1st beer we did consume
We stole our 1st joint from my aunt Cindy
We shared our 1st real boyfriend

We took on the world with no regret
We thought we could handle in all
We never lost a bet
We even hung out at the mall

We grew apart somewhere along the way
We have not even talk in almost a year
I wish you were here to stay
I really have but one a great fear

Have we really lost each other
or this can we mend
Will we find another to call
our Best Friend

© Copyright 2004 STEPHANIE PIERCE - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2004-01-31 07:03 AM


welcome to passions
KristieSue
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2 posted 2004-01-31 08:45 AM


Welcome to Passions!  You have mail!

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16
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3 posted 2004-01-31 08:53 AM


Welcome To Passions!  This looks like a very heartfelt poem.  

...A useful quote...

        "Make new friends
         but keep the old.
         One is silver
         the other is gold"

I hope that things get resolved for you, and that you enjoy it here at Passions.

               ^*-Kim-*^

...SMILE...It confuses people!!!

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-01-31 10:07 AM


Welcome to Passions
Sounds like you and your best friend went thru the mill, lol, but, time can make people drift apart, cicumstance, etc
Ringo is my best frirnd, you'll see his work and comments here at PIP, we haven't bought smokes, or shared a joint, or boyfriend(cringes at the thought as I laugh hard)
but, we do share alot, that starts in the heart
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2004-01-31 07:28 PM






(big hugggssssssss) This is a very heartfelt debut, sweet friend, time can indeed ake people drift apart but if the good intentions and wishes are always there, a friendship can never die, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Stephanie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stephanie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

garysgirl
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6 posted 2004-01-31 07:40 PM


Stephanie, welcome to Passions. This was a very
heartfelt first post. I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs  
Ethel

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
7 posted 2004-01-31 09:00 PM


Very good poem! Grover.
McLean
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since 2004-01-05
Posts 484
state of marital bliss
8 posted 2004-02-01 04:30 PM


Welcome to Passions, Sweet Steph...

Tough topic you introduce here.  As we grow and try to guide our own off-spring in the right directions, it is often hard to explain the comings and goings of friendships.  That one, I haven't figured out.  I do know if a friend is truly a friend, no amount of time can cause "un-knowing".

Just my opinion.

Again, Welcome!

McLean

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
9 posted 2004-02-01 04:36 PM


Welcome to Passions!  Friendships are important; this makes me think of the Ya Ya Sisterhood!
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
10 posted 2004-02-01 05:01 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I very much enjoyed your first post.
Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

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