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0 posted 2004-01-31 05:04 AM



moving onwards into the moonlight
a wish to lay in the snow and purify the worlds worries
to make a checkmate play on a whim that was sent in the wind
so far away from all our selfishness and greeds, high above the clouds and seas,
to the fortress that awaits our smiles snd passions of the soul
to walk a million miles in the shoes of our fathers, and to have cared for children like our mothers do.....
floods of tears come with time
a blessing of the heart
sacred hallways leading home, to a brightining light
steping out of the shadows the patterns recycle anew
winters cold hand slows the drums beat to a
hybernative trance , freezing dreams and life as one


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1 posted 2004-01-31 05:06 AM


mmmm, I love the illusion
reminds me of camping...makes me want to leave the everyday and do what I want to do.  Live. thoroughly enjoyed.

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2 posted 2004-01-31 05:07 AM


this deserves a secopnd comment as it is the best poem I have read in a long time. I love it.  so refreshing

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3 posted 2016-02-16 05:58 PM


C? - Thank you very much!! Great comments, glad you liked it!!

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil)

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