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CanadianPoet
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0 posted 2004-01-31 02:04 AM


The crushing sound of a heart
The gut wrenching pain of her leaving
The sorrow will never part
This is where the hurt begins
Every thought of you
Brings on a new pain
The hell i go through
The hurt still remains
Sometime in my life
The hurt will end
I know that day will come
That is when i will reach my heaven

Copyright ©2004 Christopher Gordon Bradshaw

© Copyright 2004 CanadianPoet - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 2004-01-31 02:12 AM


Sorry for the hurt if this is what you are going through or have been through....you expressed your hurt well, I felt it.

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-01-31 04:56 AM


I relate well

good expression

Michelle_loves_Mike
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3 posted 2004-01-31 09:56 AM


They say times heals all,,,just not how long it takes
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2004-01-31 07:56 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Christopher, I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, the hurt will end even well before you reach heaven as He has a plan for blessings to come to you here on Earth, God Bless You, keep the faith, we all love you so much! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Christopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
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5 posted 2004-01-31 08:51 PM


Can identify. Very well written! Grover.
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