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CanadianPoet
Junior Member

since 2004-01-25

Posts 12

0 posted 2004-01-31 02:03 AM

Ever have the feeling that someone is watching you
Ever have the feeling that someone is there
Someone protecting you and you don't have a clue
From the corner of your eye an image appears
When you turn to look there's no one
You try to tell someone and they think you're crazy
Eyes of the angels know what you had done
From a distance things look hazy
They protect you
They protect me
They know what we do
They see what we see
The eyes of the angels are upon us
Thinking of all the wars
Thinking of all the senseless deaths
All the never healing sores
All we have is faith
No one wanting to stop
No one wanting an end
How can we say we are civilized when what we are is really barbaric

Copyright ©2004 Christopher Gordon Bradshaw

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2004-01-31 02:09 AM

This is true in every word, we are being watched....

I liked your poem, the feeling I got from it, the thoughts it made me think....great..
and the point you made near the end, fantastic!

we are animals sometimes

~ARH

love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-01-31 05:41 AM

good thoughts here

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-01-31 08:00 PM

(big angel hugs) I do believe too that men are the most evil of Gods creatures and are the source of too many problems and sorrows, nevertheless He hasn't given up on us and sends the angels in hopes to temper us and restore us to love and share compassion as we should! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is an angelic write from your sensitive heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Christopher, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-01-31 08:46 PM

Fast paced metre. Message very eloquently said. Effective!!! Grover.

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