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VAS
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2004-01-31 12:04 PM


Cat Do’s

The order of “to-do's”
today,
may it keep me from my itches.

No matter if I’m in or out
whenever
my tail twitches.

First seeking
of the day
is to ponder what is sought.

A lovely bit of sunshine
splayed
on a carpet spot.

A curling
from my ears to tail
in the shadows of the hall

to a stretching
and a lolling
as sunlight splashes off the wall.

Nibble at my food,
and chomp
at what remains

in the dish
of my “sister” cat,
my domicile’s bane.

Cat rules
and agendas
may be quite selfish at best,

but you really must admit
a dog gets
nary this much rest.

©January 30, 2004


Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2004-01-31 12:07 PM


This is so cute.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Krawdad
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2 posted 2004-01-31 12:27 PM


Life is what you can get away with between naps!
Enjoyed!

Michelle_loves_Mike
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3 posted 2004-01-31 09:50 AM


The life of a cat,,,alto loathsome creatures, seems to be pretty good, cute write
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2004-01-31 01:28 PM


I'd give you some constructive critiqe, but I have to chase my tail for a bit, and then I'll be taking my fourth nap of the day. So much to do, and so little time.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Andrew Scott
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5 posted 2004-01-31 01:46 PM


An enjoyable look into the feline mind.  
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2004-01-31 03:09 PM




(smiles) I've never understood how cats and kittens are so hated and are considered "spawns of the devil", dearest friend, I love kittens, though the rest of my family hates them, and they are sooooooo cute even when they get in lots of mischief! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooooo cute, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Ericc
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7 posted 2004-01-31 03:46 PM


Great write!

Eric

Deb Lynne
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8 posted 2004-01-31 10:05 PM


You must have been hanging out with my three boys.  I can just hear them saying these things..cute !
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