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jaicie114
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2004-01-30 03:23 PM



Moonbeams dance upon my face
Starlight gathers in my hair…
Love’s lingering kiss
Warms my lips
As I await your return.

From where will you come
I do not know
How will you find me
I have no clue.

But, the cast of love
I scatter throughout
The night’s galaxies
Will lead you home
To my yearning heart.

Who you might be
I could not guess
But when you arrive
You, I will bless.

For, the whispers of the moon
And the winks of the stars
Have foretold the secret…
That my Beloved awaits
In the winds of eternity.

And…

I choose to believe.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2004 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-01-30 03:26 PM


"For, the whispers of the moon
And the winks of the stars
Have foretold the secret…
That my Beloved awaits
In the winds of eternity.

And…

I choose to believe."

Beautifully said...and yes, you have to believe!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2004-01-30 03:44 PM


That's the spirit jaicie!

I liked this a lot!

Richy
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3 posted 2004-01-30 03:50 PM




This was heavenly Jaicie.

Don't ever stop believing...


~ Richy

Ada'doLisdo'ti
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4 posted 2004-01-30 04:40 PM


Very touching

I chose to believe too
no other choices do I hold
Than to wait
for what stars fortold

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
5 posted 2004-01-30 06:46 PM


Nancy,
Thank you...yes, believing is sometimes all we have...but, then sometimes it's enough!

Bluesy,
I'm so glad you like it a lot! I just wrote it this afternoon and didn't know whether to post it. Most times, I "sit" with a piece to make sure it's finished...but, this one didn't "want" to do that.  So...whew!  

Richy,
Heavenly, huh?  That wouldn't be because of all the stars, moons, galaxies and such stuff...now, would it?  LOL  Thanks for your sweet reply!  

Ada,
Your reply is an exquisite addition!  Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2004-01-31 03:08 AM


Very magical and full of love and longing!

Your heart is always felt and seen from your poetry!

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-01-31 04:55 AM


I wish I could borrow some of your faith

Love this write and you

ambrish
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8 posted 2004-01-31 05:50 AM


How will you find me
I have no clue.
  
i choose  to believe.
         wonderful words.

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
9 posted 2004-01-31 11:43 AM


ARH,
LOL...yeah, I pretty much just put all of me right on out there!  Thank you for seeing it!

Dixie,
You already have all the faith you need, dear One...just look inside!  But...until you're convinced, here's my heart:  

ambrish,
I'm so glad you believe, too!

Thank you all for the replies!  I sincerely appreciate the reads!

Love and Light...jc

suthern
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10 posted 2004-01-31 03:51 PM


How very beautiful. *S* Even if heaven comes right to our door, we still have to choose whether to believe enough to open it... or miss out. *S*
Ericc
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11 posted 2004-01-31 03:57 PM


Beautiful Jc...simply beautiful.

Love,
Eric

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
12 posted 2004-01-31 05:16 PM


Yep, suthern...we're always at choice!  Not sure whether that's a good thing or not at times!  

Dear One...thank you...you know how much your opinion means to me!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

ThisDiamond
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13 posted 2004-01-31 05:23 PM


Believe!

Bravo! TD

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
14 posted 2004-01-31 05:25 PM


ALWAYS, TD!!!  

Thanks!  

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Mistletoe Angel
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15 posted 2004-01-31 06:11 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I believe it too as I believe that you will find all the happiness you desire and dream of and it will color your world wih rainbows forever! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jaicie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
16 posted 2004-01-31 06:35 PM


Oh, Noah!

I love your rainbow wishes!  My favorite!     I wish the same for you. Thank you for reading and leaving such a warm reply.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Magnus
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17 posted 2004-01-31 06:55 PM


For, the whispers of the moon
And the winks of the stars
Have foretold the secret…


They have indeed,  and you will know.

Nicely written,  enjoyable write.

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
18 posted 2004-02-01 01:11 AM


Why, thank you for that sweet comment, Magnus. I really appreciate it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Margherita
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Eternity
19 posted 2004-02-01 10:34 AM


It's a joy to travel among the stars with you dear jaicie ... such magnetic words will call him forth!
Love and hugs. Margherita

iliana
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20 posted 2004-02-01 12:15 PM


Yes, JC, believe!  This is beautiful!   hugs to you, jo
garysgirl
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21 posted 2004-02-01 12:43 PM


For, the whispers of the moon
And the winks of the stars
Have foretold the secret…
That my Beloved awaits
In the winds of eternity.

And…

I choose to believe.


And, Jaicie, sometimes our wishes do come true......
beyond our expectations.  
Hugs,  
Ethel



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