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Rain Swollen |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Rain swollen; |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
it's kinda peaceful to just close my eyes and imagine the sound of the rain... nice job... "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done. I see the stream. And hear the rushing water. believe in what your heart feels... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh this is very nice...and again...seems to have two meanings  seems as if spring may be begining to warm within you...  ~Dawn |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Well done. I see the stream. And hear the rushing water. Thank you Scorpio, Your comment is deeply appreciated as for me traditional haiku are about the senses.... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
hank you Kristie, I am very pleased to know the haiku evoked a peaceful feeling... May peace prevail on earth ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
oh this is very nice...and again...seems to have two meanings seems as if spring may be begining to warm within you... ~Dawn I deeply appreciate your perceptive and sensitive comment, Dawn. It is amazing to me how a neutral and objective traditonal haiku can convey very clearly and subtly one's emotional states w/o mentioning them at all...just in a simple observation of nature. ~P |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can only imagine this |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I can only imagine this Dixie, Your imagination is so vivid that you convey in your poems, I can only wonder where your images will carry you...~P |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rain does seem to sing a song. This is beautiful, choshi. I also love haiku and senryu.  Hugs  Ethel |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
This is beautiful, choshi. I also love haiku and senryu Thank you Ethel, I hope to see some haiku from you....~P |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write...thank you for the inspire! Another raindrop and the stream will overflow into the meadow. Hugs~Nancy ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
i'm always amazed at how a complete image can be formed by just a few well chosen words! Enjoyed... Sadelite |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Another raindrop and the stream will overflow into the meadow. Thank Nancy, What an image... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
i'm always amazed at how a complete image can be formed by just a few well chosen words! Thank you ~S ....yes! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Rain swollen; the song of the rushing stream pierces bare mountains. big belly mountain drinking the rainfall giving birth to a stream |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Paul, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love the serenity of a mountain stream and outside on the plateaus overlooking Boulder, the streams near Eldorado Springs and Hanging Lake near Glenwood Springs are breathtaking! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a powerful painting in this one...well done!!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I love the serenity of a mountain stream and outside on the plateaus overlooking Boulder, the streams near Eldorado Springs and Hanging Lake near Glenwood Springs are breathtaking! Thank you Noah, sounds just lovely...I have always wanted to visit Boulder and Naropa Inst...[One Day] |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
big belly mountain drinking the rainfall giving birth to a stream Cute! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
a powerful painting in this one...well done!!! Thank you VAS... |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This was purely beautiful. Or was it beautifully pure?! Good work, I liked this, the imagery is fantastic. ^*-Kim-*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ Your imagery is complete in this piece~ The read created a serene comfort in it's beauty~ I 'play' with the Haiku and Senryu's ... you might enjoy this 'little' one~  /pip/Forum81/HTML/002904.html AND ... I want to thank you for sharing such lovely pieces with us~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
This was purely beautiful. Or was it beautifully pure?! Either way, Thank you Kim ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Paul~ Your imagery is complete in this piece~ The read created a serene comfort in it's beauty~ I 'play' with the Haiku and Senryu's ... you might enjoy this 'little' one~ Thank you Marge...I am glad you found serene comfort...and also, I just took a peek at your link to senryu...Thanks for sharing ~P |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Choshi -- Gee, I love this one! |
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