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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2004-01-29 11:42 PM


Eyes have never know of beauty,
more astonishing than autumn's wood.
As the rising sun- shines majestically,
filtering through the dying foliage,
that trees do boast so proudly;
only to lose to a gentle breeze,
that whisks its' beauty away,
to blanket the umarked graves,
of fallen companions.
What more can be said of the trees,
that have stood the burden of time;
and through the plague that relieves,
them to stay in such a place- as Paradise.
And to the inhabitants that do call home,
from fowl to deer, that give breath to thee-
Truley nothing is more admirable-
than that of these inhabitants,
as they live honorably;
in a world of innocense!

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-02-11 04:08 PM


I'm glad that I decided to look back on the
back pages today. If not, I would have missed this poem. I liked it.
Hugs  
Ethel

iliana
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2 posted 2004-02-11 05:30 PM


I totally agree with the sentiment here!  (Have one myself along the same lines which I might post one day.) -- This was an excellent rendering!
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2004-02-12 05:34 AM


This was so beautiful it needs to go up top!

~ARH
love and hugs


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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