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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-01-29 11:17 PM



I Have Searched For Reasons

Because of your avoidence
It seems you are letting go
I have searched for reasons
I suppose I shall never know

I noticed the gradual fading
As each week passes by
I have searched for reasons
Had silence meant goodbye

I looked upon each promise
My heart always believing
I have searched for reasons
You never mentioned leaving

I feel those pangs of despair
With my heart slowly sinking
I have searched for reasons
Because I never stop thinking

HopeĀ©2004

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-29 11:58 PM


Hope, this is beautiful writing,
even though it is sad.
Hugs  
Ethel

HopeS
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2 posted 2004-01-30 02:37 AM


Thank you Ethel for your kind reply ,

yes it can be both confusing and frustating , I sent him the poem , so for his answer I am patiently waiting
Hope

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3 posted 2004-01-30 03:46 AM


I guess I'm on the other side of this write now...and by your writing, I know how he feels...I guess I should resolve this


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4 posted 2004-01-30 04:45 AM




Ohh Hope, what a sad situation this is. I sure hope that everything works out for the best.

All I can say, is that it would be his loss.
You try and be strong, and hang in there OK?

We're all here for you, if you need anything

Take care, OK?
Richy



HopeS
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5 posted 2004-01-30 08:35 AM


Thanks Dixie , yes I guess there is always the one on the other end , I sent him the poem so hopefully all will be explained soon , either that or another one of his excuses LOL
Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-01-30 08:37 AM


Thanks Richy for your caring , thoughtful reply , yes at times like this I call on inner strength

Hope

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7 posted 2004-01-30 10:06 AM


I know the never stop thinking thing all to well hope, and sometimes I wish I could just get the thoughts to slow down a little!
Enjoyed this Hope, peace to you hon!

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8 posted 2004-01-30 10:28 AM


know how that feels...

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

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