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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2004-01-29 11:08 PM



here I sit alone
bored out of my restless mind
someone play with me?

solitary soul
where have all the people gone?
pray they quick return

things to do today
item one: acquire a life
any life will do

this is kind of fun
writing senryu poetry
helps to pass the time

hum a little tune
'imagine all the people...'
living in my head

we could play a game
maybe we already are
must be 'hide and seek'!

sanity is lost
now I sit and pen senryu
poet therapy

ticking of the clock
marks the time since you were here
where the heck are you?!

________________


Hi there all you happy people...
Forgive my moment of insanity?...lmao...
What can I say?...I'm BORED tonight...
and it was something to do...grin


"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-30-2004 12:42 AM).]

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Alicat
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1 posted 2004-01-29 11:10 PM


*chuckle* But witty and whimsical nevertheless. I did enjoy this one, which lightened my normally jaded mood.

Thanky for that.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2004-01-29 11:12 PM




(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, I'll play with you, dearest friend, let's go skip in the sandbox, yay!



(giggles) This is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, poetry is always a wonderful way to pass the time away, God Bless You, you ae everyone's friend here as you are one in my heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-01-29 11:15 PM


im bored too tonight
too much winter i hate it
kill the snowpeople

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-01-29 11:20 PM


"moment of insanity" yes have been there before and I've totally enjoyed yours dear  
hehe

M  


Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-01-30 12:05 PM


Hi Vicky  
I loved this playful little senryu soup.
And, you know that I love all those little smilies.  
I'll see you later, my friend.

Ethel

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6 posted 2004-01-30 12:47 PM


oh yes, this was fun!
i enjoyed the *giggle*

Richy
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Posts 3050

7 posted 2004-01-30 01:08 AM




Vicky, what in the wide wide world of sports is going on over here...   

I keep hearing people giggling, and caring on, like a veritable laugh riot or some such thing was about to break out...


What?

You got some soup?

Senryu?

Ahh heck, give me a bowl...

I'll try anything twice
Hey, not bad...

You know what Vicky, Thank You

Really

That's just what I needed...




passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-01-30 03:16 AM


cute!
SmartChick
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9 posted 2004-01-30 07:58 PM


Me too!
Martie
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10 posted 2004-01-30 08:04 PM


how about a
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