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vlraynes
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0 posted 2004-01-29 09:59 PM



~*Ring Around The Rhyme*~



Ring around the rosy
A pocketful of rhyme
Rumplestiltskin's spinning gold
One limerick at a time

Jack and Jill went up the hill
And when they reached the summit
Jack fell down on bended knee
And sang to Jill a sonnet

Little Miss Muffet sat on her tuffet
Penning a simple senryu
While the Itsy Bitsy Spider
Spun a shimmering web of haiku

Humpty Dumpty sat on the wall
Composing a paradelle
Before he could write the very last line
He slipped off the wall and fell...

His head did swell

Little Jack Horner
Sat in the corner
Reciting a lovely free-verse
When out of the night
A villian'elle's squall
Incited the crowd to disperse

Oh curse!


~Vicky L. Raynes

*Reposted...just for a smile...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

© Copyright 2004 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-01-29 10:09 PM


Ah Vicky....this is SO cute.
Thanks for the smiles tonight.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2004-01-29 10:23 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo adorable, sweet friend, yay, ring around the rhyme, purses full of thyme, dizzy, dizzy, the heart beats honey! Hehehe, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!



May love and liht always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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3 posted 2004-01-29 10:24 PM


If you posted it for a smile you sure get mine Very unique Vicky.
SmartChick
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4 posted 2004-01-29 10:39 PM


Vicky, this is so cute. Thank you for reposting it.
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5 posted 2004-01-30 12:14 PM




You know I love this, Vicky!!

I sure am glad that you reposted it.
It's a     for sure!!

Bye for now

Ethel


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6 posted 2004-01-30 03:32 AM


how playful! I liked this!
Titia Geertman
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7 posted 2004-01-30 05:27 PM



LOL only you can write these little treasures
It was a joy to read them

Thanks for sending a smile from overseas.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Martie
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8 posted 2004-01-30 08:06 PM


Vicky..thanks for the
Richy
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9 posted 2004-01-30 08:56 PM



First of all Vicky... what is a tuffet?

And second of all, what did little Jack Horner do this time?

I’m sorry. I know, I can be as off the wall as this Humpty Dumpty character...

See?  A  nother... person sitting around...

Hmmmm?


Now as  far as this Rumplestilskin feller...


.....I’m not even gonna go there :0


Another fun write Vicky!

Thanks!





Amara
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10 posted 2004-01-30 09:01 PM


This is *so* cute! I love little things like this!

Light keep you always,
Amara

It's not only cowardly to run...

...it's futile.

McLean
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11 posted 2004-01-30 09:47 PM


I dig those spinning smilies!  And I dig your poem, too.  Cute & Creative!

McLean

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