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steavenr
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0 posted 2004-01-29 09:00 PM



love lost betrays
passion’s ways; hearts
for days break, too

© Copyright 2004 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2004-01-29 09:25 PM




(big angel hugs) This is a heartaching senryu, dearest friend, sadly this is so common and my heart goes out to all the broken-hearted for comfort to come their way! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Steaven, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-02-11 04:02 PM


Goodness, steaven...this one seems to
have gotten lost in the tumble.
Back for another round.
Hugs  
Ethel

iliana
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3 posted 2004-02-11 04:39 PM


Steavenr -- yes, I agree.  Good senyru.  ....hugs, jo
Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-02-11 05:08 PM


Wow!  Excellent...and very true!
Hugs~

  ~ Whatever our souls are made of,
      his and mine are the same. ~      
            

Sadelite
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5 posted 2004-02-11 10:57 PM


I read this earlier today and wanted to remember to post to it later.  Excellent!
Great convey...
             SAdie

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2004-02-12 05:22 AM


New love,
warms like the suns rays,
melting the heart.........

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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