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lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

0 posted 2004-01-29 06:14 PM

It starts out with you
Progression of obsession
Will it ever end?

I don't like the back
But I always love the forth
Obsession, my friend

Occupy one's thoughts
Obsession's more than a word
It's a game, my friend

Midnight is pumping
Some crazy poems tonight
Obsessed with my friend

Love isn't the term
Not anymore- I'm not sane
Obsess with me, friend

Love is forever
Obsession is for the weak
My friend, you trap me

Art inspiration
You are inside of me now
Life devastation

"All you need is love..." -The Beatles

wickedbeautifulpoetry
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 84
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2004-01-29 06:23 PM

Tis beautiful my dear Stephy.
You gots mad poetry in ya, my darling!
(Hannah thinks its about her, as I read it to her over the telly)

Hugs, kisses, and hang in theres,
Katie

Enjoy what you can, endure what you must. -Goethe

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

2 posted 2004-01-29 08:14 PM

whew! you've somehow released the stress caused by your obsession in this poem. good job! (and good luck with your obsession!)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-01-29 09:13 PM

(big angel hugs) Awwwwwwww, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, desire can be a killer if it gets the best of someone and it can have negative effects! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, this is so well expressed, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Steph, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-01-29 09:22 PM

A great poem... strangest thing entered my mind though. Someone I used to think was great. The image of Alice Cooper live onstage, singing your poem!!! (Please forgive me if this offends you. It's truly not meant to.) Very good work!!! Grover.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-01-30 04:48 AM

I remember the feeling

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