Open Poetry #31 |
CUTIE PIE |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
CUTIE PIE (A Candy Heart Poem) By: Noah Eaton 2/12/03 Hey, sweet apple of my eye You know the moment I first saw you Jumpin Jesus, with your gleaming eyes so bright And your creamy face of tirami-su And it feels so easy as key lime pie For you are my Pavlova Deluxe Just having you by my side I have no reason to cry, to complain, what luck… Come on baby, with your smile of mango chutney Whether it is warm or cold outside, it is paradise Your sweet lips taste like Creme Anglaise You’re my delight, my cutie pie All I used to taste was sorrel and soursop Now with your grace of sugar cane, I have more love than enough Your guava jelly tongue and angelic mauby song That God taught you to sing to me over a round of coconut punch Come on baby, honeybee Night or day, you are my shining satellite Destiny we will be and become destiny My sweet cutie... "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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unwantedspork Junior Member
since 2004-02-02
Posts 24 |
I must admit, just the pictures alone draw me to this. Where do you find such cute pictures/inspiration? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
this is so sweet. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Noah ... I think I just gained a couple pounds while reading this delightfully lighthearted piece )>((((o> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Noah, you cutie pumpkim (as I call my son), this was so adorable! Really made me smile....chutney and guava.....!!! love ya, jo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write Noah! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! took a little bit to download, but worth the wait! this is so cute and adorable! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Awwwww, Noah...this is so sweet. I love your sweet Valentine poems and pictures. . Thank you, my friend. Hugs Ethel |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
This had a lyrical feel to it. Radiating with smiles. It made me feel nostalgic. When I was a little girl my father called me cutie pie. Wonderful poem. Kie |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A sweet and delicious poem......... _______ice ><> |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
"...with your smile of mango chutney" What a delicious verbiage dessert. Grover. |
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