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Richy
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0 posted 2004-01-29 02:16 PM




The Quest


The moment we are born
we start a never ending quest
A journey of discovery
The quintessential test  

We search our new surroundings
for the sustenance we need
Our fate fully dependent  
now on others to succeed

And as we learn to flourish
at our loved ones gentle hand
They help to lift us to our feet
so we can make a stand

Our confidence then nurtured,
to help make us more adept
We’re taught the promise that is
gained, by taking that first step

Our passages are plotted out,
to help us pave the way
In hopes that we can steer a course
that leads us not astray

And with our confidence secured
to tackle the unknown
We have the light within,
when darkness finds us all alone

Instilled now with a courage
for the battles to be fought
We stand a fighting chance by
using wisdom we were taught

And as we try to right the wrongs
and live a life that’s just
We travel with an open mind
to learn the price of trust

Stripping through the layers,
we reveal the naked truth
Only to find answers
that do anything but soothe

Our life’s pursuit of happiness
can be a daunting task
Our low self worth can often
make it seem too much to ask

And sometimes even when our
search has left no stone unturned
We carry on to savor all the
feelings that we yearn

The answers we’ve been looking for
through rambles thick and thin
Has been there waiting all along,
deep in our hearts within

The things we need the most in life,
are never on a shelf
The quest of life will be complete,
the day you find yourself

© Copyright 2004 Richy - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2004-01-29 02:54 PM


And as we try to right the wrongs
and live a life that’s just
We travel with an open mind
to learn the price of trust

This is a wonderful message Richy,
and filled with so much truth to ponder.

As always, your posts are heart felt.


Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2004-01-29 03:58 PM




(big angel hugs) Yay! Awwwwwwww, I absolutely love this, sweet friend, and know always that he has a plan for us all and you will discover along the way just what is part of it all! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, you're doing great on your adventure, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-01-29 04:21 PM


"The things we need the most in life,
are never on a shelf
The quest of life will be complete,
the day you find yourself"

Wonderful write Richy....and this final stanza sums it all up.
Hugs~E

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Suetang
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4 posted 2004-01-29 05:18 PM


Hello Richy

This was an absolutey exquisite piece of writing and you should be so proud of this.  Your words spoke to my heart and I could see myself through your words to which I could relate so well.

"Love alone is capable
of uniting human beings
in such a way as to
complete and fulfil them,
for it alone takes them
and joins them by what
is deepest in themselves"

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

suthern
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5 posted 2004-01-30 09:13 AM


Our life’s pursuit of happiness
can be a daunting task
Our low self worth can often
make it seem too much to ask

How very true... and what a difference it makes when light pierces the darkness. *S*

I like this very much, my friend. *S*

HopeS
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6 posted 2004-01-30 10:12 AM


Excellently written Richy and  wise words indeed

Hope

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2004-01-30 10:15 AM


Wise words Richy and an outstanding write!
passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-01-30 01:01 PM


much needed today...and tomorrow too

so I'm putting this in my library!

Martie
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9 posted 2004-01-30 01:05 PM


Richy

"The answers we’ve been looking for
through rambles thick and thin
Has been there waiting all along,
deep in our hearts within

The things we need the most in life,
are never on a shelf
The quest of life will be complete,
the day you find yourself"

Wise words and so very true!

garysgirl
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10 posted 2004-01-30 01:15 PM


Richy, this is a very true poem.
I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs  
Ethel

Richy
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11 posted 2004-01-30 01:21 PM




Bluesy ~ Thank You Bluesy! It’s always nice to see you here. I hope all is well with you and yours. Have a great weekend.  

Noah ~ Thanks Noah, with friends like you to lean on, how could anyone not find what they’re looking for.

Nancy ~ Thank You for always being there Nancy, you’re very special.

Sue ~ Sue, you are the sweetest! Thank You for that!

Suthern ~ That’s so true Suthern. It sure helps. Thanks for stopping in. And please take care.

Hope ~ Thank you Hope. It’s so nice to see you here. I hope things are going well.

Gentle Spirit ~ How nice to hear from you Gentle Spirit! Thanks so much for your kindness.


Thanks Again Everyone!
Richy

Richy
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12 posted 2004-01-30 01:24 PM




Dixie ~ Thanks Dixie. Nice to see you.

Martie ~ Always so nice to hear from you Martie. Thank you for the kind reply

Garysgirl ~ And I enjoyed your nice comments Ethel. Take Care.


Thanks Again Everyone!
Richy



jaicie114
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13 posted 2004-01-30 09:04 PM


Wow, Richy...

This is truly an exquisite piece of art and sets out all the Truths in a very beautiful way. Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Magnus
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14 posted 2004-01-30 09:18 PM


Richy,  a very wise man once said these
words....certainly it must have been a
relative of your own...

McLean
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state of marital bliss
15 posted 2004-01-30 09:45 PM


The things we need the most in life,
are never on a shelf
The quest of life will be complete,
the day you find yourself

AAAAAAAAAmen!  I especially enjoyed this much.

McLean

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