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Ludo
Junior Member

since 2004-01-29

Posts 23

0 posted 2004-01-29 01:17 PM

Forgotten Emptiness

Memories. The things I'll never forget,
added to all those,
which I will always regret.

All pieces of a jigsaw,
fitting together,
making me think of you.

A song on the radio,
makes me recall,
the moment
when
you were the one;
who the words
could only be written for.

Randomly I see,
think, look,
touch, hear a sound.
And when I do;
the forgotten emptiness,
suddenly refills my heart.

[This message has been edited by Ludo (01-30-2004 04:43 PM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-01-29 02:18 PM

Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

~
desired love and longing....beautiful!
~

please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly

Greeneyes~

I lie awake at night
I reach out to touch
Feel you by my side
I reach I never feel you
Will I ever get to feel you again
Just one more time

Ludo
Junior Member

since 2004-01-29

Posts 23

2 posted 2004-01-29 04:28 PM

Thank you Greeneyes.

The e-card was beautiful.

[This message has been edited by Ludo (01-30-2004 01:47 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-01-29 09:44 PM

(big angel hugs) This is such a sad but beautiful debut, dearest friend, youn deserve all the happiness you desire and soon itn will come to you through your yearning, keep the faith, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ludo, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ludo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-01-29 09:47 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
or merely a reflection of mine? ~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-01-29 09:55 PM

Welcome to Passions...
Happy to have you join us.
ThisDiamond

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2004-01-29 10:15 PM

Yes I can relate , they stay forever in our thoughts and deep in our heart

Hope

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-01-30 01:04 PM

I sure understand this!

Welcome to Passions!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2004-01-30 01:09 PM

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

9 posted 2004-01-30 01:28 PM

Wonderful post! Welcome to Passions!

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2004-01-30 01:50 PM

Ludo
Welcome and an impressive write, enjoyed.

Ludo
Junior Member

since 2004-01-29

Posts 23

11 posted 2004-01-30 01:54 PM

*hugs* Thank you all so much, for your kind, warm welcome. The forums are a really wonderful place, and the talent of you all is immeasurable.

I will definitely stay a while.

Laura. xx

McLean
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

12 posted 2004-01-30 02:34 PM

Both sad and happy this seems, Ludo.

Welcome to the forums...I look forward to reading you more.

McLean

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2004-01-30 03:15 PM

Laura~
WELCOME ... WELCOME to the circle of PiP~

Enjoyed your poetic entrance ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Ludo
Junior Member

since 2004-01-29

Posts 23

14 posted 2004-01-30 08:25 PM

I had a brain wave:

Forgotten Emptiness

Memories. The things I'll never forget,
added to all those,
which I will always regret.

All pieces of a jigsaw,
fitting together,
making me think of you.

A song on the radio,
makes me recall,
the moment
when
you were the one;
who the words
could only be written for.

Randomly I see a photograph,
think of an emotion.
Mind into overdrive.
Reflecting rapidly,
tearing apart my being, oncemore.

Looking for you-
causing me to reach out.
And when I do;
the forgotten emptiness,
suddenly refills my heart.

I think that ending is a lot stronger, do you agree?

Ludo
Junior Member

since 2004-01-29

Posts 23

15 posted 2004-02-02 06:07 PM

I have decided to keep to the first one.

10.3 if you are reading this, I miss you.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

16 posted 2004-02-05 12:50 PM

welcome to the passion

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

17 posted 2004-02-05 10:00 AM

Welcome to Passions!
very good write,,,looking forward to more
I like your name as well, makes me think of the big fuzzy fella from Laberynth!
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

18 posted 2004-02-07 12:42 PM

Ludo -- Welcome to Passions! What a fabulous first piece!

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