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0 posted 2004-01-29 10:48 AM





Rare, this gentle fall,
Angel feathers, or perhaps,
~ Pillow fight flurries ~
Snowing as it is right now
Leaving tracks on lonely minds



© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-29 10:51 AM


nice nice nice!
i like the pillow fight part!

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2 posted 2004-01-29 10:53 AM


Oh, how beautiful. *S* Your poem and picture team perfectly... wonderful! *S*
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3 posted 2004-01-29 11:03 AM


Sunshine
Something to think about.

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4 posted 2004-01-29 11:06 AM


rare?

I think falling snow often leaves such traces on the mind...

imagery is nice..and adds a softer element to the black and white of the image itself..

I enjoyed

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5 posted 2004-01-29 11:19 AM


Lovely as a softly falling snowflake.
Enjoyed this Karilea.
Hugs~

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  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

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6 posted 2004-01-29 11:21 AM


Karilea

I have never lived where it snowed, but your poem makes me want to be there, even takes me there, but without the cold.

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7 posted 2004-01-29 12:01 PM


This is so pretty and playful,
save for those lonely tracks~

Nice one Karilea~

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8 posted 2004-01-29 05:09 PM


I love the snow. A beautiful poem to go with a beautiful gift of nature!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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9 posted 2004-01-29 05:39 PM




That is the coolest picture Karilea.
They look like little space ships landing...

OK, now I'm really spaced out... lol

A beautiful thought!

Thanks for sharing this with us,
Richy



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10 posted 2004-01-29 05:44 PM


So very beautiful, Karilea.

Take care......Sue

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11 posted 2004-01-30 12:39 PM


Sunshine, I really like this verse, and
the picture, too.
Hugs  
Ethel

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12 posted 2004-01-30 12:46 PM


you can follow those...

pick a flake out
then follow it down

those are the introspective
snows

nicely done

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13 posted 2004-01-30 01:14 AM


Interesting picture!  I sure like the pillow fight idea....but I see lanterns...~K~
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14 posted 2004-01-30 03:23 AM


makes me long to pillow fight again
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