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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-01-29 12:29 PM



"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


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garysgirl
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1 posted 2004-01-29 12:50 PM


This is really neat. I like the
way you do these.

"Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry
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Heart Hugs, Ethel

Krawdad
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2 posted 2004-01-29 12:52 PM


Temperature falling
snow drifting
white on white

steavenr
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3 posted 2004-01-29 12:54 PM


so many events in such a sweet package...loved it
Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2004-01-29 09:17 AM


To get such a full picture, with so few words,,,,wonderful
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

McLean
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5 posted 2004-01-30 10:10 PM


Grey caught my focus in this.  Over and over again, yep..."grey".  What is the difference between Gray and Grey?  I also then strolled off to think of the Grey Man of Pawley's Island.  I don't much believe in ghost stories, or do I?  They are quite chilling.  Much like "grey" in your write.  It is haunting me, this standout of an impression.

McLean

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6 posted 2004-01-31 12:58 PM


this touches the mind

and it's as if I feel the feathers and the whispers against my ears and cheeks and I can hear the dust being swept up by the sky

Wow, what a magnificent poem and presentation!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2004-01-31 01:58 AM


So much powerful emotion in such a small package!

~ARH

love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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8 posted 2004-01-31 05:40 AM


gorgeous
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