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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-01-28 11:30 PM


Victoria's Secret

It never fails, at some point
it just gets in the way.
And so I say, when around me,
women don't need lingerie.
But some hot shot inventor had
to go ahead and invent it anyway.
Perhaps he was a romantic nobody,
trying to get closer to heavenly bodies.
Victoria I know your secret,
but I'm not telling anybody.

JamesLee
January 27
2004


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2004-01-28 11:48 PM


Very interesting poem. But I liked it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Snow
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2 posted 2004-01-28 11:53 PM


a piece that made me go ..

hmmmmm..... interesting :)

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if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda


Krawdad
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3 posted 2004-01-29 12:06 PM


Well, darn, I missed the show!
But around here we are thinking long-johns, not lingerie, this time of year!

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4 posted 2004-01-29 12:23 PM


I always knew it couldn't be a very big secret -- no place to hide it!

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garysgirl
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5 posted 2004-01-29 12:58 PM


Always the romantic, huh? LOL
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6 posted 2004-01-29 10:12 AM


ROTFL, enjoyed this write, James.
ThUnDeRkYsS
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7 posted 2004-01-29 10:22 AM


Very clever, nice read this morning

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-01-29 11:17 AM


Cute write James..
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Bonnie j
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9 posted 2004-01-29 11:40 AM


The secret of Mz.Victoria is she lives in Fla. not in Alaska.
Good one
Bon-Bon

Paula Finn
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10 posted 2004-01-29 11:48 AM


Aw now come on...isnt there even just a LITTLE part of you that wants to rip that pretty piece of silk right off of her? Its all just part of the game now isnt it?
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11 posted 2004-01-29 04:47 PM




(giggles in delight) If but one thing isn't a secret in the world, it would have to be Victoria's! There's no one who hasn't heard it yet! LOL! (smiles) You just can't trust another to hold the secret, LOL, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

1slick_lady
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12 posted 2004-01-29 04:49 PM


and i think...she should send me a christmas, birthday and thank you card too ...lol...h
JamesMichael
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13 posted 2004-01-29 05:41 PM


Thank you loner, Snow, Krawdad, Ratleader, garysgirl, Midnitsun, Thunder,
Enchantress, Bonnie, Paula, Noah, and 1slick lady for the nice responses...
Actually my secret is that I love to see a woman in lingerie, but at some point it does get in the way...James

Marsha
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14 posted 2004-01-29 08:05 PM


James darling man, this was delightfully playful pennings, and I loved it. But then I always love your writing, it is always uniquely and individually special. Absolutely great work, I do read your writings you know I just tend to stay out of the limelight these days. You are as always an excellent read


Love you always
And forever
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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