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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
worth is not built on love’s silt or tears spilt lightly (a Burmese Than-Bauk) |
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wickedbeautifulpoetry Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 84Indiana, USA |
you say a lot within these three lines great, thought-provoking write -katie |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Applause! TD |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
well.... it kinda feels like i was lead here to read this tonight. (deepsigh) "...why does my skeleton pursue me if my soul has fallen away?" ~p.neruda [This message has been edited by Snow (01-29-2004 01:19 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This so true. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good writing, Steaven. I liked it. "Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Interesting form. Musical. I like it. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
wicked…thank you…I found this style very challenging…3 lines of 4 syllables with the rhyme scheme flowing from 4th syllable in line one, to 3rd in second, to 2nd in third…glad you liked it ThisDiamond…thank you (as he picks up the bouquet from off the stage) Snow…thank you and thanks for reading and commenting loner…thank you…there are some really deep feelings in this for me garysgirl…thank you very much Krawdad…interesting comment…musical? Perhaps it comes from the idea that this form of poetry should be a clever saying, an axiom, if you will |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...very needful of these words, and grateful for the spirit that moved you to write them... ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*mouth dropping open* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh the truth be told, so beautifully! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Kahlil, so glad you found this helpful…thanks for the kind comments passing shadows, high praise from you…extreme thanks BluesSerenade, I sincerely thank you…this short poem is one of my personal favorites. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Very well done! It just amazes me how you find all these forms and seem to effortlessly flow from one to the next. Incredible! Thank you. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a great saying! Also, thanks for the information on this form of writing -- something I had not heard of before.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Steaven, this is most precious wisdom, sweet friend, the silt amounts to nothing, it has to be the nutrients too like those of the soil to make love blossom, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Steaven, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Bravo. A real accomplishment-- 1000 words in 3 short lines! Grover. |
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