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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2004-01-28 02:46 PM

TWENTY OR LESS…#187

Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON

your delicate heliotrope lips
simmer my words

forgotten feelings touched

soft purple memories smile
ripe and delicious

with desire

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Grover
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1 posted 2004-01-28 03:01 PM

True abstract. Your contrasts and choice of words are effective. Sort of Sci-fi! Good work. Grover.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-01-28 03:05 PM

Good one Mark!
Although...I always thought of myself more of a daisy person.

Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
or merely a reflection of mine? ~

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2004-01-28 06:44 PM

Hey Grover. Thanks for your observations.

Nancy, I'd say your colors encapsulate the entire spectrum of flora.

-MVS

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Mistletoe Angel

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4 posted 2004-01-29 10:02 PM

(smiles) I love the colors this poem brings about, sweet friend, this is in full bloom as your heart is, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-01-30 04:46 AM

makes me want some grapes

MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2004-01-30 11:20 AM

Thank you, Noah... a harbinger to spring, I suppose...

Dixie, that sounds good...

-MVS

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Cpat Hair

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7 posted 2004-01-30 11:43 AM

your delicate heliotrope lips
simmer my words

(chuckling).. Now Mark.. this is an opening to play on words and images that I truly wish I had written... love the simmer and how it ties to "helio' and still would play well with several other possible ways heliotrope lips might warm words enough to make them simmer...

very nice work sir.. as always..I enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2004-01-30 11:46 AM

MARK,
I'd say you're in like Flyn. LOL

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-01-30 11:46 AM

a delectable delight Mark, another very enjoyed write from your pen.

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2004-01-30 12:09 PM

Ron, if you'd like, you can "borrow" those lines and run with them -- I'd love to read what you come up with.

Sy -- much appreciated.

Gentle Spirit -- and a much enjoyed response. Thank you.

-MVS

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garysgirl

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11 posted 2004-01-30 08:11 PM

A beautiful write, Mark.
I enjoyed reading.

Hugs

Ethel

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