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Nightshade
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0 posted 2004-01-28 01:38 PM


~thankyou to my sister Enchantress for the inspire~
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If only I had
pockets
I would go
to the store
with Dad.
I would buy myself
the biggest bone
That a Shih Tzu
ever had.
If only I had
pockets
I would hide away
Mom's keys.
Then both of us would
go for drives
As long as she spoke
"Please?"
I would gather chestnuts
on our walks,
and take them
home for play.
Or stash some
kibble in
the folds,
To snack on
some other day.
If only I had
pockets
I could save my
chewy toy
The one that's
soft and smelly,
and makes me
salivate with joy.
Each day I gaze
out of this window
Until the sky turns
dark.
Imagining showing
off my pockets
To my envious
pals down at
the park.

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Chris Barker
January 2004
~~~


~hugs to my dog Meeka~



© Copyright 2004 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-28 01:41 PM


Annabelle isn't the only one who is smiling!

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2 posted 2004-01-28 01:42 PM


Chris!!  Chris!!  You did it!  
This is exactly what we were talking about the other day!
Yes..you must find Meeka a sweater with pockets!
Love this Chris..well done..so cute,
and give Meeka a hug from Auntie Nancy.
~Smiles, Hugs, Love & Miss ya, Teed~

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3 posted 2004-01-28 01:46 PM


Too cute Chris, your poem and the picture!
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4 posted 2004-01-28 01:53 PM




(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, your Shih Tzu looks soooooooo adorable, sweet friend, hehehe, and if Meeka had pockets, she could tuck away all the meat in the freezer as rations for dinner! LOL! (does happy giggly dance) Awwwwwwww! (pets Meeka on head softly then rubs belly softly) Yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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5 posted 2004-01-28 02:04 PM


Hee hee hee. Thankyou everyone. It was fun writing this. Glad you enjoyed.
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6 posted 2004-01-28 02:04 PM


cutest little poem matching that furry little puppy in the window!

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7 posted 2004-01-28 02:28 PM


Very Cute Chris.  Wonderful picture too.  May I ask who walks whom?

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2004-01-28 02:29 PM


Aw, this is cute! Who knows what dogs are thinking....give Meeka a pat for me, ok?

~sky

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Hold on, it gets better than you know....
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9 posted 2004-01-28 02:32 PM


Chris this is absolutely the cutest poem and have to send this to Kit, she absolutely loves dogs.  Adorable, this was, yes it was!

         
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10 posted 2004-01-28 02:57 PM


Very cute... adorable even. Well done - quite the amusing bit o' poetry.
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11 posted 2004-01-28 03:05 PM


What a slice of the good ole heartwarming life... with a Shih Tzu! A very well written poem, upbeat and warm! Grover.
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12 posted 2004-01-28 04:03 PM


Thankyou all so much!
Hugs!!

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14 posted 2004-01-28 07:48 PM


Chris, I love this. It is so cute.
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Very cute, Chris...

Thanks for the smile, my friend...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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16 posted 2004-01-28 08:03 PM





Darn it... if only they could cross a Shih Tzu with a kangaroo...

Yeah, but then you’d need a pogo stick to take him out for his evening jump... ! ...

Ahhh, forget it...



That was really cute Chris!
Richy



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17 posted 2004-01-28 08:07 PM


Thanks all!! Meeka is sitting in my lap admiring the pic of herself....hee hee. hugs and a woof woof !!
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18 posted 2004-01-28 10:09 PM


Very Cute

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19 posted 2004-01-28 10:21 PM


Great thought and imaginitive play in this one Chris. Fun. TD
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20 posted 2004-01-28 11:19 PM


Nice...James
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oh my...this is so adorable!
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22 posted 2004-01-29 06:36 AM


Awwwwwwwww ... I loved this Chris! What a visual, lol.

What a wonderful way to look at things through the eye of our furry four legged cuties!  I know a dog who wished she had these same pockets too. This was great!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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23 posted 2004-01-29 09:29 AM


What a delight this is!!! *S* Thank you for the smiles. *S*
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24 posted 2004-01-29 02:53 PM


Chris, I've started to reply to this a couple of times.
I wanted to get a picture of Scooter for Meeka, but
I've gone and forgotten it again.

Anyway, he sure would like to meet her.
I loved your poem, and Scooter did too.
Hugs to you and Meeka,
Ethel and Scooter

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25 posted 2004-01-29 04:47 PM


NightShade~
This is sooooo positively ADORABLE~
My brother has one (almost identical) that is 12 years old ... and still as spry as as a pup~
His name is Macho ... (the doggie ... not my brother)
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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26 posted 2004-01-30 12:24 PM


Chris...this was adorable...I have a Chihuahua that says, IWTIHWT!  
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