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If Only You Could Know
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If Only You Could Know |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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If Only You Could Know I wish that I could write a song, that only we both knew I wish that when you heard it you would know that it’s for you I wish it had a melody that stirred you deep inside I wish that it would free the feelings that we try to hide I wish that all the words would somehow flow into your heart I wish that it would show how much, I’ve loved you from the start They say that once you write a song, it never goes away I hope that every wall between us doesn’t have to stay I wish that I could climb into your dreams and hold you tight I wish that I could stay in there and love you every night I wish that I could kiss your neck and whisper in your ear I wish that I could tell you all the things you need to hear I wish that you would realize my heart is in your hands I wish that all our feelings, we could one day understand They say that once you write a song, it never goes away I hope that you are listening, my love is here to stay I hope that someday every word inside this song comes true I hope that when you hear them all, you know there all for you Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (01-28-2004 02:48 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aw Richy, this is so sweet! so sweet! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*sigh* very lovely...she must be a lucky girl! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) God Bless You, dearest Richy, this made me cry but with a smile knowing there are still romantic, faithful, sensitive people out there like you who can truly feel inside ones heart in love and she will forever be blessed by the song of your heart you share! (smiles) Songs are so important to me and I write my own songs and dream so much someday I can become friends with a sweet girl and watch the friendship bloom into love, with the friendship always shining so the song will never stop like a music box, yay, you deserve true happiness always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Who hasn't wished for this....this is beautifully expressed, Richy!  ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is a very sweet and romantic song, Richy. I hope she knows how lucky she is. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautiful, Richy... She is lucky, indeed... and, as Martie said..I hope she knows... Hugs to you, my friend... "When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." --Jimi Hendrix |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Richy: She will hear... whether it's sung aloud or not. *S* This is absolutely beautiful... you write love very well! *S* |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Such a song ! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Richy Your words were music to my ears, so beautiful and so very romantic, they literally swept me off my feet. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
Thank you for writing what most men are afraid to say.... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Lots of excellent verse here. What can one say? Grover. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Richy, what a beautiful "love song" this is. I also hope that she klnows this. "Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank You everyone, for the nice comments. You know, the funny thing is, that when one person cares for another, it doesn't always mean that, that other person cares for them back, in the same way... I don’t know... maybe some people are just destined to never know, what real and true happiness really feels like... And, it can make one start to wonder, why they might even deserve to, in the first place... Either way... Who ever said life was fair... right? Thanks Again Everyone, Richy  [This message has been edited by Richy (01-29-2004 01:09 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I wish that I could climb into your dreams and hold you tight I wish that I could stay in there and love you every night Play it again, one more time now! Love the romance, and this song your singin' Richy~ |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Yep...this is about as good as it gets! You're awesome!  Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"They say that once you write a song, it never goes away I hope that you are listening, my love is here to stay" Wow, this would make a really wonderful song -- have you set it to music? It is begging for that, you know. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
OK Bluesy, it’s playing... softly in the background... And even though I turned the speakers southward I think that the only way your going to be able to hear it Is if you close your eyes, and open up your heart... If you do that, then I’m sure that someway, and somehow... The music, will find you... |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
well ... i wanted to give you some wonderful deeply thoughtful response.. but this piece touched me so deeply in my frame of mind at the moment.. that i'm strictly in ramble mode.... ~off to find kleenex~ hugs, snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
This was so touching , wishing heart to heart harmony I have been so close to a song writer , I often wished one of his songs were for me , afterall most poems are about him Hope |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Awww Snow, that's really what we're here for, right... I'm sorry if your heart is sad tonight It will get better, I just know it! And Snow, Thank You for reaching down, and lifting me up... That was very kind of you |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Jaice ~ Oh Jaice, really, that is much too kind a thing to say. I sincerely thank you though, anyway. iliana ~ What are you kidding me... you should hear it when I accompany it with my kazoo... Ohhh, you want to talk about velvet honey... And the dogs in my neighborhood... they just go nuts when I’m out back late at night rehearsing... ! ... there fun.  Thanks iliana!Hope ~ Aww Hope, I know how you feel... the only song ever sang to me was, “Hit The Road Jack” and that was from my mother! Thank You Hope. I appreciate that. |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
This had a lyrical feel to it. The words, context, stanzas all touched me. I hope all your wishes come true. Beautiful to read. Kie |
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