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0 posted 2004-01-28 11:53 AM



Little Charlie

If the evil men do lives after them,
it is good to be forgotten.
Sometimes good is all that flows
from a man, what is worthy
and therefore forgettable
because he gave no harm,
struck no harsh chord
to set the memory on edge.

Wisdom is not said by any number;
truth contains no decimal point,
and if the world turns around
another center, is it not better
to know the cleanest road
from Huntsville to Siloam Springs
than to chase ambition out
into a far strange land?

Patient till the last, accepting
what passes and driving on,
steering through life’s haze,
those are a man’s virtues;
and if he can be happy in them,
that man is king of the world
that has befallen him.
Such living cannot be praised;
it is its own eulogy, written
through years, delivered
in uncalculated laughter.

That we who remain remember
if only for a while, give honor
that was never sought
and praise that springs up
from the inner wish that we
could reach the mark he set
merely by being, doing what
was his to do; in the last measure
that is a man’s only legacy.
Take what he may, this
is all he can ever give.


Charles W. McCormack Jr.
March 31, 1924 – January 24, 2004

© Copyright 2004 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-28 12:04 PM


Such living cannot be praised;
it is its own eulogy, written
through years, delivered
in uncalculated laughter.

It doesn't get better than this, my friend. Those who seek honor often aren't worth the giving of it... You've shown me someone I didn't know... but wish I had.

and praise that springs up
from the inner wish that we
could reach the mark he set
merely by being, doing what
was his to do; in the last measure
that is a man’s only legacy.

And that's worth more than any property a man could leave behind. What a beautiful tribute... I hope you send it to his family.

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2 posted 2004-01-28 12:06 PM


I did, C/O the funeral home. They'll present it to his family along with the guest registry from his funeral, which is probably ending right now.

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3 posted 2004-01-28 12:08 PM


I'm so glad. *S* There's nothing that can take away the grief of losing someone so special... but knowing how they touched others... and how they're remembered... You've given such a gift...

To them... and to us.

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4 posted 2004-01-28 12:38 PM


damn...

beautiful

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5 posted 2004-01-28 01:36 PM


Well done Ed.
Very well said.

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

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6 posted 2004-01-28 02:27 PM


"Patient till the last, accepting
what passes and driving on,
steering through life’s haze,
those are a man’s virtues;
and if he can be happy in them,
that man is king of the world..."

Well said, Ed!

"As I have heard, the man who knows
On land how best to be at peace
Will never meet a tiger or a buffalo;
In battle, weapons do not touch his skin.
There is no place the tiger's claws can grip;
Or with his horn, the buffalo can jab;
Or where the soldier can insert his sword.
Why so? In him there is no place of death."

~~from the 'Tao te Ching'~~

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7 posted 2004-01-28 03:26 PM


What a heatfelt tribute! emotional....

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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8 posted 2004-01-28 03:37 PM


Ed....

"Such living cannot be praised;
it is its own eulogy, written
through years, delivered
in uncalculated laughter."


Although you knew him...now you see him even brighter, for in death he has become a light that you look towards and strive to emulate.  I know he would be happy to know that about you and I'm sure his family is greatful for this gesture of love.

Well done!  Hugs to you!

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9 posted 2004-01-28 03:37 PM


Yo 'Box -- you just quoted one of my favorite passages from the Tao....thanks for that memory -- I haven't read it in too long, and I think I'll pick it up tonight.

And Martie...you are wise, as ever...

Thanks to everyone for reading my little tribute...it doesn't do him justice, he being a living proof that brilliance and wisdom are not related, and that life's rewards are not necessarily reserved for the strong. A life-guide to me, this little fellow of constant good will and peaceful acceptance of the person he was.

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10 posted 2004-01-28 06:14 PM


I'm impressed, ed.
This is excellent writing.

And, I wish I had known him.

e

[This message has been edited by Krawdad (01-28-2004 07:48 PM).]

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11 posted 2004-01-28 06:19 PM


Ed~
While reading this ... I felt an unexpected tear fall from my eye, cascading slowly down my cheek ... I knew that you had touched me deeply, just as Little Charlie had touched you~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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12 posted 2004-01-28 07:24 PM


Though this is such a personal tribute, there is so much wisdom in that first stanza that it is truly a universal gem:

"If the evil men do lives after them,
it is good to be forgotten.
Sometimes good is all that flows
from a man, what is worthy
and therefore forgettable
because he gave no harm,
struck no harsh chord
to set the memory on edge."

Excellent...thank you for sharing

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