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Dull and Exciting
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Dull and Exciting |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Have always dreaded the dull and mundane but life is cut short just the same... now I dance in a circle to tunes of excitement trailed by friends who believe in delightment.. gather not the sorrows of a poor crop wait not, want not... for success to flop... just about accepted more of the same due to a life that started mundane |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love the rhyme scheme. I like the message within the piece too. Well done wordwizard...now I am going to have to start watching out for your stuff. You've hooked me into reading with this piece...keep up the effort. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's hard not to fall into a routine comfort zone... but then it starts to ache great write here, made me think |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know I'm smiling... dance the dance of day's mundane all you'll have is a flat refrain.   |
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