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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-01-27 10:44 PM


A speechless leavening of truth,
Intrinsic language only seen
Deepening by width and breadth
That fondles
Shining in the hush
Locked in synchronized breathing
Harmonized swimming
Looks gaze gently over curves and boundaries
Blending heated channels to the soul
Mirrors like deep pools photograph moments
Dampened of discover
Intimate the color
In softest darkness
Questioning and answering the same
Whispered every flicker of the flame
Showing the way, seeing the way

Mesmerized

Copyright Kkh 1/27/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
J.Samm
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1 posted 2004-01-27 10:47 PM


"A speechless leavening of truth,
Intrinsic language only seen"... MESMERIZING indeed

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2 posted 2004-01-27 10:59 PM



Wow !!

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3 posted 2004-01-28 03:17 AM


this feels a bit "sexy"!
love the lush description..


passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-01-28 04:00 AM


outstanding!
jaicie114
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5 posted 2004-01-28 02:17 PM


Wow, TD...this is absolutely awesome. Thank you!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

DavePage
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6 posted 2004-01-28 08:36 PM


I love it

I wouldn't however ask what you were doing

regards

Dave

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7 posted 2004-01-28 09:39 PM


Kathleen, this is beautiful writing.


"Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters." William Curry

Heart Hugs, Ethel

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8 posted 2004-01-29 04:12 PM


Yes...wow!!!

Eric

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9 posted 2004-01-29 06:18 PM




Oh TD, this was nice and peaceful.

I swear, as I was reading it, I could feel my headache going away...

Thanks for that!
Richy

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