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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-01-27 09:50 PM



Below The Surface


it pains me now
to think of you
how high your bones
sit settled stacked
and me stalactite
or stalagmite brine
a design made from tears
a heart left dripping
just an endless empty echo
in every room of this chamber
I stumbled and it tunneled
to an emotional catacomb
under grounds of missing


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
J.Samm
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1 posted 2004-01-27 10:40 PM


heartfelt lines...it shows.
MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2004-01-27 11:06 PM


Fresh imagry, Slicky -- very visual.  Hope you're feeling better.

-MVS

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3 posted 2004-01-27 11:19 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Helen, this is so very haunting but well-expressed, sweet friend, let there be an amethyst mine in the back of the cavern where new treasures are bound to come to you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

gemjop
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4 posted 2004-04-02 04:33 PM


and me stalactite
or stalagmite brine
a design made from tears
a heart left dripping

Helen, brilliant imagery, conjures up all sorts of sights and emotions. hugs to you. xxx

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