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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-01-27 09:47 PM



did you ever stop to think
why i do the things i do
why i laugh at your jokes
why i'm always there for you
did you ever think that maybe
just maybe
there might be a reason
my heart screams
i love you
but you just walk by
with nothing more than a smile

when we're talking
i can only hear my heart pounding
pounding so loud
so loud
are you saying something?

i'll just smile
smile
does it even matter if i know what your saying
its always about her
her
why not just break my heart right now
its better than this feeling
gut-wrentching
finger-twisting
needles-in-the-spine
pain
pain

but in the end
life is a road
and you can't just stop
because of a flat tire
i'll just keep driving
keep my eyes on the horizon
because thats all that matters
the furture.

© Copyright 2004 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
J.Samm
Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines
1 posted 2004-01-27 10:42 PM


needles in the spine...i'm not a stranger to the feeling... you brought it out well.
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-01-27 10:47 PM


Drives home the importance of expressing emotion. Very well delivered. Frank. Honest. Good job. Grover.
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3 posted 2004-01-27 10:52 PM




(sigh) Oh Chelsea, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this made me smile as you look to the future and find that morning star shining to you, twinkling that a promise will be fulfilled and you will be blessed! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chelsea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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