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choshi
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0 posted 2004-01-27 06:30 PM



...and afterwards....
inhaling deeply,
slowly exhaling
as the moon crosses the sky
in the waning night,
rising smoke mingles in reverie
with sweet scents of summer.

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1 posted 2004-01-27 06:32 PM


Very calming, peacful thoughts...enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

choshi
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2 posted 2004-01-27 06:36 PM


Very calming, peacful thoughts...enjoyed.
Hugs~

My gosh ~E, I just posted this....well thank you....*hugs* back ~P

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3 posted 2004-01-27 06:39 PM


..this sounds a bit sensual and i dont know why!..
maybe its my mood...

always as gorgeous as before (maybe a bit more)

~Dawn

choshi
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4 posted 2004-01-27 06:48 PM


..this sounds a bit sensual and i dont know why!..
maybe its my mood...

always as gorgeous as before (maybe a bit more)

~Dawn

Well, Dawn, I can very much appreciate your mood, but then on the other hand, you are reading my intentions here clearly.... ~P

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5 posted 2004-01-27 06:57 PM


afterwards???  hmmmm....sounds like the perfect ending to the perfect beginning

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

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6 posted 2004-01-27 07:42 PM


so relaxing, so peaceful, so comfortable
choshi
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7 posted 2004-01-27 08:56 PM


afterwards???  hmmmm....sounds like the perfect ending to the perfect beginning....

Kristie, Thank you....~P

choshi
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8 posted 2004-01-27 08:57 PM


so relaxing, so peaceful, so comfortable

Hi Steven, glad it came through ...~P

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9 posted 2004-01-28 01:28 PM


since when do you smoke?
choshi
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10 posted 2004-01-28 05:55 PM


since when do you smoke?

...not for many years...poetic licence?
.......well, the personas in the poem were certainly "smoking" metaphorically....would you believe incense?...

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