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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2004-01-27 02:51 PM



wicked...wicked
dance the dread of
spirits fed on
innocents in
happenstance of
hapless stance and
restless days in
wait of
dead
and buried deep
beneath the growing
of the knowing
of the worth, the
virgin lies in
sheltered keep
within her sleep
of dreams unfed
and purity is
fantasy as
echoed in the
voice of
mime

circle...circle...
shuffle feet in
wicked
wicked
dance of
time


~Vicky L. Raynes

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

© Copyright 2004 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-01-27 03:48 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Vicky, it hurts me deeply to know of the truth that so many's innocent fantasies are vulnerable to the troubles of the world and I pray many more can sleep tucked away from them and live free of the doubts! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2004-01-27 06:13 PM


A cascading flow of imagry and thought which brings to mind incubus visions to the tune of Danse Macabre...

-MVS

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-01-27 06:15 PM


I echo what Mark said exactly Vicky.
Well done!
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
  or merely a reflection of mine? ~

Richy
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4 posted 2004-01-27 06:21 PM




Vicky, you're really giving Edgar Alan
a run for his money on this one.

This is sad, but incredible.

I hope all is well...

Take Care,
Richy



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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-01-27 07:07 PM


Oooooh, my goodness. Well done Vicky. hugs to you, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

Martie
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6 posted 2004-01-27 11:40 PM


Vicky...Understanding this!  
dgvarner
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7 posted 2004-02-03 06:05 PM


Yes...you're sounding much like Famed Poets of Yore...

enjoyed...

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

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