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Through the Eyes of Possibility
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Through the Eyes of Possibility |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Through the Eyes of Possibility I let my fingers brush against the soft of you, the part that invited me to feel again and watch that sparkle, yes tiny, but there in your eyes, that leaves me with possibilities. You chanced me, the odds against you but winning just the same. And someday you will pull from me this truce in life and suspend me off balanced in your power, swaying me through the eyes of possibility. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hey M, these two lines especially grabbed me with possibility (pun intended, of course...  ):And someday you will pull from me this truce in life and suspend me -MVS P.S., (and a very cool title, too!) You CAN make a difference: http://educate-yourself.org/ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ The sunny South *sighs*~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Mark...I believe in possibilities and that the eyes have it M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And someday you will pull from me this truce in life and suspend me off balanced in your power" Wow! Love this Maureen! Excellent write..love the words above especially. Hugs~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Marge, I sigh too, at least once a day. Expecting more snow any hour now... funny how shoveling doesn't make me thinner exerting all that energy...all it does is make me soaked with sweat! M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Nancy I was thumbing electronically through the dictionary/ thesaurus looking for a thought I wanted and instead chose that phrasing.. Thanks *s M |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
You write so deeply and layer your writes in such a gifted way. I am always pleased to see something new from you. You are always ascending the heart to new realms. Thank you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Jeff, I appreciate the kind words and that you take the time to read me. *s M |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Mmmm anything is possible in love. This was a wonderful poem :-) "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I let my fingers brush against the soft of you, the part that invited me to feel again and watch that sparkle, yes tiny It's the little things that make one believe in the endless possibilities. Heart hugs Maureen~ and thank you for sharing a vision. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this type of writing looks very good on you...you wear it well! |
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