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James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

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Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2004-01-27 10:52 AM

   I love            wind

                               It

       brings

                                 me

                    atoms

   you

                            have

            breathed

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-01-27 11:02 AM

i like this!
creative way to "look" at breathing!

~Dawn

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-01-27 11:09 AM

Ah James, now you know anyone
with a germ fetish is now reaching
for a surgical mask.

LOL...smile. This was very creative
and I enjoyed it!

Martie

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3 posted 2004-01-27 11:17 AM

Jamie....I love wind too!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

4 posted 2004-01-27 05:02 PM

And you take my breath away with writes as beautiful as this. *S* I guess I don't have a germ fetish... for this makes me want to inhale. *S*

Excellent work! *S*

Ravenwolfvoyager
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5 posted 2004-01-27 05:57 PM

That was really deep James, I truly appreciate this great write of yours!

Sadelite
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6 posted 2004-02-19 08:35 PM

Nicely shaped and formed to express your ideas... I enjoyed this a lot.

iliana
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7 posted 2004-02-21 01:16 AM

James -- very creative and wonderful thought!.....jo

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2004-02-21 02:59 AM

AWESOME!

Sadelite
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9 posted 2004-02-21 08:21 AM

   I love            wind

                               It

       brings

                                 me

                    atoms

   you

                            have

            breathed

As this was still in view this morning, I thought I'd pop in and take another read.  I'm glad I did.  This time I read inside out and upside down.  It was interesting that way too:

   BREATHED ATOMS BRING WIND
   I LOVE YOU; HAVE ME?  (Well, I didn't use every word, but was close...)

   ATOMS HAVE BREATHED (Just the thought of
those three words together!)

   I'm sure there are a multitude of ways a reader can translate this!

   AWESOME-simple but your format leads
to incredible play and deep thought.

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